Audience essay
feedback:
WWW:
- Great analytical writing ability – some great topic sentences and vocabulary which relates to the statement.
- Added some media terminology – ‘consumer, digital media and binge-watching’
- Balanced arguments which you have provided sufficient advantages and disadvantages for each industry.
EBI:
- Add more examples for the newspaper industry
- Pay more attention to spelling, grammar and word choice.
- Consider copying your essay into Microsoft Word and correct any words/sentences with red and blue lines
LR:
1. Develop newspaper industry paragraph – adding more
examples of ‘citizen journalism’ examples and how the industry has changed due
to the rise of the internet
2. Add key media terminology look back at your notes, blog
and GLoW
3. Check SPaG throughout essay
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