Statement of Intent: Feedback and learner response

1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI.

I need to develop my intro (settings) and why i chose the two settings specifically and how they link to each other. I also need to develop my audience section by promoting an aspirational and successful lifestyle for teenagers not about promoting the actual lynx brand.

2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative? Why?

I don't need to make any changes to my narrative as i'm positive that it is convenient for the advert.]

3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your Statement of Intent?

I can improve the media terminology in my statement by using more appropriate ones for every sentence that i write. 

4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next draft?

My section was really strong i don't need to address anything. 

5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target audience (14-18 year olds) enjoy your advert?

The target audience (14-18 year olds) will enjoy the advert because the advert contains an aspirational and successful lifestyle which shown through the character practising basketball.